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Thursday November 6th, 2008

The exercise:

Not having the best day ever, so the prompt is: bad day blues.

Mine:

Bad day blues
Blindly drinking booze

Dark bitter days
Disjointed blurry daze

Answers give away
Anger gone astray

Gritty acrid glow
Gloom always grows

Sad footsteps slow
Secret feelings show

Falling snow flakes
Facade so fake

2 comments:

  1. Sorry you were feeling down.

    I hope the stars infuse you
    with all their brightest light
    and warm all your beautiful colours
    to shine even in darkest night.

    You turned your blues into something beautiful by the way. I think i will try too.

    I left
    Tulips
    At the door

    I left
    My heart
    On the floor

    I left
    My body
    Left before

    I left
    My spirit
    Wanting more

    I left
    My beauty
    To ignore

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  2. It was actually pretty therapeutic to write that yesterday. I also had a much, much better day today so life is good again.

    Thank you for both poems - the first made me smile, and I could feel the second deep inside.

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