The exercise:
Your topic for your Two Haiku Tuesday this week: au naturel.
Mine:
On silent tiptoes
You entered my little world
So naturally
* * *
Rain leaks from grim clouds,
Cool winds slice through summer shirts -
It's just fall's nature
2 comments:
Those are both quite sweet little haikus, I'm hard put to pick a favourite. I think, after deliberation, I'll go with the second because I like the weather :)
Au naturel
Storm-lashed autumn starts,
The weather's au naturel,
It still feels like hell.
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I take my coffee
Black, no sugar, in a mug.
Just au naturel
I like the second one better too, though I'm not sure it's due to the weather theme :P
Haha, love the last line of your first one. The last line of your second one is quite good too!
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