Ah, I can see from your prompt that you're hoping that kidnapped Emma overhears some useful conversation from her kidnappers! Well, she might do, but I think we won't find out about that just yet :)
Overheard But her phone still has the line to Red left open; She’s bold but she’s not stupid, and he overhears those words. He stands up from his chair and winces, Breathing hard is something for which he doesn’t care.
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Ah, I can see from your prompt that you're hoping that kidnapped Emma overhears some useful conversation from her kidnappers! Well, she might do, but I think we won't find out about that just yet :)
Overheard
But her phone still has the line to Red left open;
She’s bold but she’s not stupid, and he overhears those words.
He stands up from his chair and winces,
Breathing hard is something for which he doesn’t care.
Greg - perhaps. But this alternative works just as well, if not better :)
Red's back in the game! A little (or a lot) worse for wear, certainly, but still!
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