Daily writing prompts since June 9th, 2008
Rush outside, who calls?A crumpled shape lies in rocks Leg bloody, twisted. Paramedics come Load her up, adventure is Done. Despair -- life over. Hope in hospital A listening ear, a new Place to live -- new friends.====================escape
@morganna -- and in a rush of haiku your tale is over. I'm quite sad it's ended really, even though I knew it had to sometime.repairs"Make it better, please.""Eye repairs are tricky... I'mNot sure this will work."Depth perception's forEverybody else. You're notDying -- be grateful!
Morganna - these three haiku make a fine ending for your epic haiku adventure. Well done!Greg - hah! That second haiku... just a pitch perfect conclusion to the first :)
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