Tuesday May 8th, 2018

The exercise:

Write two haiku about something that has been: rewritten.


Greg said...

It's been a busy day, so I'm getting to the haiku :)

Doubts plague us. We walk
On eggshells because we wrote
Our vows in water

Vows (marital) we
Each made need updating now --
Rewritten in stone...

Marc said...

Greg - impressive acrostic work here, though I like the first haiku best. That's some subtle but powerful stuff.