Tuesday September 4th, 2018

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: the rental.

4 comments:

Greg said...

I admit to being deeply curious as to what is inspiring these current prompts, so I'm looking forward to you catching up on comments now :)

The rental
It's incremental,
We pay more for this rental,
Every single month.

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I want free love, but
Your hourly rate is dirt cheap:
You're a hot rental.

morganna said...

High above the street
It reeks of pot and methane
No death trap for me!

Am said...

The walls were quite bare
Boxes still strewn all over
But it felt like home

Her life packed away
The moving van honked outside
It was hard to leave

Marc said...

Greg - nothing too exotic. Just was dealing rental companies as I was trying to figure out a car for our visit to Calgary. I was rather surprised by the variations in policies and costs for, essentially, the same danged thing.

I was thinking how much I liked your first one, then I finished reading your second and couldn't stop laughing. So, yeah, that's my pick this week.

Morganna - yeah, I think I'd give that one a pass as well...

Am - these two go so well together, they paint quite the scene. Nicely done.