The exercise:
Back safe and sound from the Okanagan, had a really great time there. The drive back was a bit of an adventure though, so today's starter is: road trip.
Mine:
Rain flooding the highway
Feel like I'll fly away
Passing cars spray gray mist
I am lost in their midst
A sports car in the ditch?
Well isn't that just rich.
Maybe we should slow down
Before our engines drown
2 comments:
That road...
yellow-lined...
speed-signed...
goad...
That road...
concrete paved...
time-saved...
bode...
road...
car-filled...
oil-spilled...
node...
rode...
life past...
money-fast...
heart-stowed...
we rode...
rain-kissed...
sun-blissed...
wind-blowed.
Really, really like the repetition and the slight changes in each stanza. Thanks for sharing.
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