The exercise:
The four line poem topic for this rainy Saturday is: slowing down. I tacked on an extra one from the expert on chill.
Mine:
There's no need for all this rushing around
Precious moments in this brief life abound
The destination is the same for all
Take it all in before you get the call
Jack Johnson's:
Slow down everyone
You're moving too fast
Frames can't catch you
When you're moving like that
- Inaudible melodies
2 comments:
pink shelled finger tips
taken to nervous bits
scattered neatly on the floor
hesitating at the door
I like this a lot, it really captures the moment beautifully.
Post a Comment