Don't you have to be a project manager to be back where it all began? Or was there a job before that one? :)
Back where it all began Time travel induces time-rage: People travel back to another age, Where, they fancy, "it all began". They're disappointed, to a man.
Greg - pretty sure it all began with newspaper delivery. This was intended more as 'back where my time with the town began', but I'm quite sure you knew that and are just being nitpicky :P
I like the idea of time rage being like road rage. I feel like that idea could be explored further, actually.
Anyway. Really like this. I'd say especially the final line but I appreciate all the lines pretty much equally here.
Even now the smile in his eyes Though crinkled around the edges like old paper Remind me of treehouses in late spring Before he was more than “cooties”
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Don't you have to be a project manager to be back where it all began? Or was there a job before that one? :)
Back where it all began
Time travel induces time-rage:
People travel back to another age,
Where, they fancy, "it all began".
They're disappointed, to a man.
Greg - pretty sure it all began with newspaper delivery. This was intended more as 'back where my time with the town began', but I'm quite sure you knew that and are just being nitpicky :P
I like the idea of time rage being like road rage. I feel like that idea could be explored further, actually.
Anyway. Really like this. I'd say especially the final line but I appreciate all the lines pretty much equally here.
Even now the smile in his eyes
Though crinkled around the edges like old paper
Remind me of treehouses in late spring
Before he was more than “cooties”
Am - this is lovely and brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing this with us :)
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