Tuesday August 7th, 2018

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: final days.

2 comments:

Greg said...

Final days goes well with going out with a bang but both have a slightly apocalyptic feel to them. I feel like I ought to be summoning up Bill and Ben to handle these prompts :)

Final days
Finally I can
Retire and catch up on sleep.
I've worked forever.

Death is inviting
After years of endless pain.
Yet it makes me wait....

Marc said...

Greg - unintentionally apocalyptic feel, but yes, I see what you mean.

Nicely done with the acrostic. These are both painful in their own way. I think I like the second better, if 'like' is the correct word. Appreciate might be the better choice...