Thursday July 21st, 2022

The exercise:

Write about: spinning.

2 comments:

Greg said...

Spinning
Her hands dart like silver fish
In water deep and charcoal-dark,
Keeping plates in motion,
Spinning on slender poles
In both directions.

She ignores the chalky shriek
Of china plates wearing away
As they spin, spin, spin throughout the day
And each plate can never stop,
Because she doesn't know what she'd do if that happened.

And when the plates multiply
To the point where she thinks she might die,
She spins plates on top of plates
And the shrieking conceals her screaming
And the smoke of fusing china makes her cry.

Marc said...

Greg - this is quite fantastic. I think the final stanza is my favorite but obviously the whole dang thing is great.