Tuesday December 6th, 2011

The exercise:

Two haiku about: the hypnotist.

Feeling maybe slightly better today. Perhaps.

Mine:

Please don't tell me that
I am getting sleepy while
I'm trying to drive

*     *     *

I find it rather
suspicious that he never
gets speeding tickets

3 Comments:

Greg said...

Your colds always seem to knock you out for a couple of days!
I like your second haiku better today, just because I think the world would be a more interesting place if it were true. There's a story waiting to be told there.

The hypnotist
"Trust me," he told me,
"I'm a hypnotist." He's gone,
And I've no clothes on!

------------

Our King approaches!
We all hail the Hypnotoad!
Futurama rocks

:)

writebite said...

the hypnotist

big eyes draw you in
a clock face, tick, tock, tick, tock
you're getting sleepy

your phobia leaves
no longer useful to you
your cure effective

Marc said...

Greg - yeah, I think a lot of fun could be had with a hypnotist as a main character :)

... and your first haiku displays that nicely!

Writebite - I find your first one rather... mesmerizing...