Saturday September 24th, 2011

The exercise:

A four line poem about: chocolate.

I suspect I'll be having a fair bit of that on the cruise.

I'm back tomorrow! Hurray for the end of scheduled posts!

Hurray for finally being able to go to bed...


It makes everything better,
Whether melted or in chunks.
It even makes insects tasty -
Who would have ever thunk?!


Greg said...

Do you not sleep well if it's not in your own bed then? I think, partly as a consequence of all the travelling I do for work, that I can sleep pretty much anywhere, anytime. I think that's a good thing :)
It's a cute little poem, but I think it also shows now that you were writing ahead a lot and getting tired towards the end :)

The new kid, who moved next door,
Showed me chocolate he'd stolen from his mum,
"Don't eat that," I said, "it's Ex-Lax!
It'll all run out your bum!"

Marc said...

Greg - nah, generally I sleep fine wherever I am, as long as the bed is comfortable. My comment was actually referring to the time I was writing it at... which was around 2 am the night before we left, if I recall correctly.

And yes, I was definitely done by the time this one came around :)

Yours caught me off guard, and was definitely worth a good laugh.

hoodwinked said...

chocolate is a milky treat
when i have it i
eat and eat and eat
thats why i love a milky treat