Saturday September 24th, 2011

The exercise:

A four line poem about: chocolate.

I suspect I'll be having a fair bit of that on the cruise.

I'm back tomorrow! Hurray for the end of scheduled posts!

Hurray for finally being able to go to bed...

Mine:

It makes everything better,
Whether melted or in chunks.
It even makes insects tasty -
Who would have ever thunk?!

3 Comments:

Greg said...

Do you not sleep well if it's not in your own bed then? I think, partly as a consequence of all the travelling I do for work, that I can sleep pretty much anywhere, anytime. I think that's a good thing :)
It's a cute little poem, but I think it also shows now that you were writing ahead a lot and getting tired towards the end :)

Chocolate
The new kid, who moved next door,
Showed me chocolate he'd stolen from his mum,
"Don't eat that," I said, "it's Ex-Lax!
It'll all run out your bum!"

Marc said...

Greg - nah, generally I sleep fine wherever I am, as long as the bed is comfortable. My comment was actually referring to the time I was writing it at... which was around 2 am the night before we left, if I recall correctly.

And yes, I was definitely done by the time this one came around :)

Yours caught me off guard, and was definitely worth a good laugh.

hoodwinked said...

chocolate is a milky treat
when i have it i
eat and eat and eat
thats why i love a milky treat