The exercise:
What are you talking about? I did not almost forget to do this today. You're all crazy.
Today (*cough* tonight *cough*) the exercise shall be: write a haiku (or two) about memory.
Mine:
I remember you,
How you dismissed my feelings -
Your loan is denied.
The fog is too thick;
My eyes cannot see your face
The day we first met.
4 comments:
Precious Memories
the bass of his voice
as he turned to me and said
love me forever
her small hand in mine
and cheeks as pink as seashells
baby's breath so sweet
we stood together
sun sank below horizon
and he kissed my lips
My offering:
Your memory sings
in my blood like wild fire --
I burn remembering.
And LOL at your first haiku.
Laura Jayne - those were all lovely (the memories and the haiku)
Ana - I live to make others laugh :)
And I like how vivid yours is.
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