Daily writing prompts from June 9th, 2008 to December 31st, 2022
Still in bedat 11:27 in the morningrelaxingor just lazy?
Nice little stanza! May I offer as my four line poem on relaxing:When I relax I only anneal,Made brittle by what shall pass.As shiny as brass, as brittle as glass,From peace to the strength of steel.
My body sinks down on the couchMy mind becomes clearer as the thoughts slow downAll the negative energy searches for an exitThere it is, a long, deep sigh
@Laura Jayne: relaxing. Definitely relaxing. :)@Greg: heya, thanks for stopping by! I like the rhythm of your poem... and I'm not too proud to admit that I had to look up anneal.@Bunny: a wonderful expression of the true power of sighs. Thanks for the poem!
Heya Marc, I've been stopping by for a while, lurking in the undergrowth :) I thought it might be time to admit that I'm here though.g
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Still in bed
at 11:27 in the morning
relaxing
or just lazy?
Nice little stanza! May I offer as my four line poem on relaxing:
When I relax I only anneal,
Made brittle by what shall pass.
As shiny as brass, as brittle as glass,
From peace to the strength of steel.
My body sinks down on the couch
My mind becomes clearer as the thoughts slow down
All the negative energy searches for an exit
There it is, a long, deep sigh
@Laura Jayne: relaxing. Definitely relaxing. :)
@Greg: heya, thanks for stopping by! I like the rhythm of your poem... and I'm not too proud to admit that I had to look up anneal.
@Bunny: a wonderful expression of the true power of sighs. Thanks for the poem!
Heya Marc,
I've been stopping by for a while, lurking in the undergrowth :) I thought it might be time to admit that I'm here though.
g
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