Daily writing prompts since June 9th, 2008
Holy crow, you on the same mental frequency as me or something? I was just talking with a friend of mine about my most recent bit for Lunacy (which is *gulp* two and a half months in the works... ><)...BUT!! IT'S ALMOST DONE! I JUST HAVE TO TWEAK THE ENDING!Ahem. Sorry. Where were we?- - - - - - - - - -"Sanity is notstatistical." Yeah, Orwell?What's sanity, then?I've decided this:insanity's crazy, yetmuch more in'tresting.- - - - - - - - - -New lunacy bit should be soon! Very soon! I promise!!
@g2: I think I agree with Orwell from your first haiku, but that in no way detracts from it, but overall I like your second better, it's very strongly in your voice.@Marc: Ah, definitely love your second, for all it evokes memories of the Watchmen (film and graphic novel).InsanityThe horrors are real,Which is why I like my cell.They can eat your brains.------Thoughts like a corkscrew,Twisting, turning, consuming me.I'm diff'rently sane.
Marc - Your first haiku reminded me of the many things that i did when everyone else's is not, certainly insane! The other haiku sounds lovely :)g2 - Both of your haiku pictured insane nicely :)Greg - I like the way you described both of your haiku, your second is clearly my favorite! Mine:Love and hateIs the most craziest thingThat I’ve ever known.*** Things that I doMade me saneAnd also insane.
Mine follow-up on my response to yesterday:That awful flicker Seen wherever I look now The demons are here!No one to save me Their edges are flickering How can I be free?
I must be out of mindto try something like this.Here goes something.* * *I have just what you needto cure your touch of sanity.Think outside the mind for 5 minutes.
g2 - Lunacy has been on my mind lately, yes. Now that I finally got a chapter up for the western, the jail break story is next on my list, and then I'll get to thinking about following you up.I like your second one best :)Greg - I really should get around to watching that movie at some point...I love your first one :DZhongming - I like both of yours, perhaps the first one slightly more :)Morganna - ah, two excellent follow ups! Well done :)saint321 - 'here goes something' is a great phrase, and one I should use more often.Welcome to the blog! Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing some writing - I hope to see more from you :)
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