Saturday March 14th, 2009

The exercise:

The topic for this week's four line poem is: afternoon nap.

What?

Mine:

Eyelashes embrace;
My room is replaced
By far off spaces
And forgotten faces.

3 comments:

septembermom said...

Sweet Afternoon Slumber

All tasks are half done,
Too many errands to run,
Soft couch calls to wrap,
all my tension in a nap.

Greg said...

Heya Marc, like the new blog layout, even if it does keep making me think of chocolate. Do you have a sweet tooth then?

Afternoon nap:

It shouldn't make a difference,
Whatever the time of day,
But the nap of the rug in the morning,
And the afternoon goes opposite ways.

Marc said...

Septembermom - sounds to me like you've earned that nap :)

Greg - good to have you back. Though I do love me some chocolate, red happens to be my favorite color and I just thought the brown went well with it.