Thursday March 19th, 2009

The exercise:

I'm in the mood for haiku today. Let us use "drawing" as the topic.

Mine:

A single black line
Frames a poor imitation
Of your rosy lips

You asked me to draw
One more card from your soft hands
But I liked my deal

White background with a
Hidden scene in the foreground -
Snowman In Snow Storm

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Your eyes: two circles.
My pencil can't reproduce.
Intangible you.

Your mouth: red roses.
They wither beneath my touch.
Ephemeral you.

Your hair: black wires.
I am lost in symmetry.
Electrical you.

Unknown said...

Oh and hee your haiku made me giggle, especially the last line.

Marc said...

Thanks Ana :D

Yours is absolutely lovely. 'Electrical you', what a great line.