The exercise:
I'm in the mood for haiku today. Let us use "drawing" as the topic.
Mine:
A single black line
Frames a poor imitation
Of your rosy lips
You asked me to draw
One more card from your soft hands
But I liked my deal
White background with a
Hidden scene in the foreground -
Snowman In Snow Storm
3 comments:
Your eyes: two circles.
My pencil can't reproduce.
Intangible you.
Your mouth: red roses.
They wither beneath my touch.
Ephemeral you.
Your hair: black wires.
I am lost in symmetry.
Electrical you.
Oh and hee your haiku made me giggle, especially the last line.
Thanks Ana :D
Yours is absolutely lovely. 'Electrical you', what a great line.
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